2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
-All the feedback I received was pretty valid. As my idea is an investment firm and does not actually exist yet, I really can not go into much detail further than what I have done and what my competitive edge will be. I will attempt to make it more detailed but at the same time maintain the same confident attitude that I have had in my previous videos.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
-Based on the feedback I received, I made my pitch longer, more full of definitive substance in regard to competition and also made sure my connection to the audience was more personal in my gestures. I think this will help make my pitch connect with the target market more than my previous attempts did.
Mitch,
ReplyDeleteIt seems like you have a great vision of what you want your company to become and represent. I think that your positive attitude throughout the video, as well as your clear passion for this idea were the highlights of your pitch. To tweak it, I would like to hear how you plan on working harder and more diligently than your competition. Your pitch was very broad, and I don't know exactly what separates you apart from your competition. Once you put that in your speech, it'll be perfect. Good pitch Mitch. Feel free to check out my blog at: http://uffarmer.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
I like your idea of having an investment firm. This would really help people that are interested in growing their finances beyond the regular 9 to 5 job and I hope this investment firm really takes off. I do what to hear more about your plan though. Even though I do believe you’ll work hard and do whatever it takes to meet the financial plan of your customers, I want to know about that process. But overall, I think you’re very persuasive in peaking my interest about this company. Here’s the link to my idea. Let me know what you think. http://jacobembuscado.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteI like your idea of having an investment firm because an honest firm is always needed in almost any part of the country. I think your pitch was professionally executed and your idea was thoroughly explained. You have a strong voice and your hair being styled so neatly combined with your deep blue eyes gives you a dynamic edge while pitching your idea because it makes me trust you more than I would your competition due to the clean-cut look. Great job and keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteIt was clear that you listened to previous feedback! I thought it was a nice video, and well executed. I think you could go more in depth into explaining your strategies and policies, it seemed a little broad to me. That way I could learn what really separates you from the competition more. Good luck with everything!
ReplyDeleteHere is a link to my post:
http://paigecarlent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html